Monday, November 10, 2008

Provocation

Where are you now, I’m scathed and bleeding
Do I echo in your ears when pleading?

You have my heart brushed on that canvas
Does it incite the same old flame now?
Left lone! So what? I can still grow old
It seems hushed which was once veneer vow

You know how much of my blood you owe?
How many sleepless nights I spent in woe?

Did you not say we were like jigsaw?
Which you toyed and broke into pieces
Are you brave enough to place it again?
They make you so vain, those vain teases

What about those tears you cried you croc?
Knock me today if you ought to knock

‘Morrow I’d be scared but not bleeding
‘Morrow must change, must not be pleading

15 comments:

Ritu said...

This is an angry one ..........., more defiance and rage than provocation I think

Afaque said...

Yeah initially I named it "Defiance" but then I thought to lessen the effect... :)

Snow said...

sometimes you just gotta stand up for what you want -- nice read, "those tears you cried you CROC" haha good one!

Afaque said...

Thank you "Snow"

tikulicious said...

Hmmmm very interesting ...I wonder what is the inpiration behind it ...????
A poet within ..I did not know that :)come to my pages n poetry section :)

Jay said...

nice template..

Afaque said...

Tiku Jee there comes some points in your life when you have to just let go it... and move forward... its just a pledge to myself or a reinforcement...

Alagappan said...

Nice blog u've got dude... can i know the reason for which you switched from wordpress to blogspot when most of the others are doin the opposite?

Afaque said...

Alagapan...
there are a lot of reasons why I chose to switch to blogger... out of them I wrote a few here - http://muddleheadedsblog.blogspot.com/2008/10/8-reasons-why-i-moved-to-blogger.html

n "Others doing opposite?" well, I don't go with the crowd... :p

Alagappan said...

@ Afaque- Pretty good reasons for switching to blogger... n its a good thing that u are not a part of the crowd... I too felt the same n decided to stay with blogger.. One thing I wanted to point out to you - Your template is too heavy and it is taking a long time for the page to completely load.. its better if you switch to some other template as this one is tooo slow... :-(

Afaque said...

Yeah you are right in that... but I decided to sacrifice the time issue for the sake of beautification :)

Alagappan said...

anyway.... nice blog..... am adding you to my blogroll... hope you would reciprocate the favor... :-)

Afaque said...

Sure :)

Raza Rumi said...

Good one - I liked the defiance..

Afaque said...

Thank you "Raza" :)